Love at a distance
When you had come for I heard you,And so I too left passions spentLying on the edge of my bedWishing nothing more than to feel,Feel your breath upon my neck,A hand across my chest your heat Clammy, a...
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Hi, john...I have read this a few times now, and I enjoyed the feelings it evokes...and I'm not sure quite why, but I really liked the closing; very visual indeed!OK...let's look at this. I guess the...
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Thanks for the comments - they all made sense, i will try to work on the piece and get back with a finished version - it was a very different poem to what i would normally write which is why i posted...
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